I would reduce the beginning and end montages and such by a significant amount. To me your reel takes 30 seconds to "start" and ideally it should be like... 8 at most. The beginning is the most important part.
Would rather start with the rap battle than the fight. In fact, I don't think the fight is worth putting in at all. You could also start it with your line rather than the other guy's.
Get rid of the montages, period.
Montages just make you look amateur.
The rap battle and the conversation at 2:00 are the the only things that should be on the reel.
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