I don't always agree with Miss Stone's viewpoints. But I almost started laughing when I was thinking her words pretty much verbatim just as I scrolled down and read her post.
Look right into the camera
Posts: 127 | Location: Not a good question | Registered: July 04, 2006
I look at the second headshot and I see a pose I would imagine my old girlfriend or someone I care for when I was reminiscing during a personal moment not a picture of someone I am seeing for the first time and trying to determine what if any roles to cast you. Maybe you could include the second shot with another one, but post one with your head straight.
Posts: 127 | Location: Not a good question | Registered: July 04, 2006
Originally posted by WorldFamousDeadbeatTodd: I am not a photographer or a casting director.
I look at the second headshot and I see a pose I would imagine my old girlfriend or someone I care for when I was reminiscing during a personal moment not a picture of someone I am seeing for the first time and trying to determine what if any roles to cast you. Maybe you could include the second shot with another one, but post one with your head straight.
I'm gonna try to find one with my head straight but I highly doubt I have one because for some reason I always turn to the side when I take pictures..lol..I think it's because I feel like I look better from the side that my bangs are on..but I will look.
Thanks
Posts: 13 | Location: Los Angeles | Registered: December 27, 2008
Not the second one either- your head is tilted and so it seems a little off. The bottom one would be better if you cropped it but I am concerned about the shadows and uneven lighting on your face. Any more?
Posts: 2438 | Location: the universe | Registered: June 04, 2007
You do you a great smile. Natural light is tricky to shoot in and these are not well executed. Miss Stone is correct, the lighting is uneven.
Also, next time please consider hiring a make up artist who does headshot make up. It'll even out your skin and knock the shine down.
Lastly, try transferring your weight to your front foot (the one closest to the camera).
You were doing your job in these shots. You look comfortable, have nice eye contact and a great smile. If you shoot in better lighting you should be able to get great shots!
Ther's nothing wrong with the brightness or contrast. It is the lighting. If you can't reshoot and need to use this one, have a retoucher lighten up your left eye socket and crop vertical to tighten the shot up. I did a 30 second fix for you to see.
Trying to fix a poorly lit shot is a real uphill battle though.