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Posts: 5 | Location: Queens, New York | Registered: July 20, 2007Reply With QuoteEdit or Delete MessageReport This Post
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this is my favorite, cute smile
 
Posts: 10 | Location: Sherman oaks, CA | Registered: April 08, 2008Reply With QuoteEdit or Delete MessageReport This Post
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I like this shot. Nice composition, good smile and you look great. Here are a few hints to make it a bit better. I am not crazy about the background. Cityscapes are great, but they should not take attention away from you. You need to stand out from the background also. This can be done with some backlighting with a reflector to give your hair a bit of a rim. Have your photog desaturate your teeth to whiten them. I like the narrow depth of field that throws the background out of focus and off camera flash that throws a single catchlight in your eyes and adds modeling to your face. The detail in your hair below your face could be lightened a little, it is a bit muddy.
Just a few ideas to help your HS.
 
Posts: 164 | Location: Cortlandt Manor, NY | Registered: April 11, 2008Reply With QuoteEdit or Delete MessageReport This Post
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It's great! Looks like you're having fun. Keep it!
 
Posts: 1 | Location: VENICE BEACH, CA | Registered: April 14, 2008Reply With QuoteEdit or Delete MessageReport This Post
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I think it's a great shot. Your personality is great. Good work
Cory
www.avenue22photography.com


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Posts: 17 | Location: New York City | Registered: February 20, 2008Reply With QuoteEdit or Delete MessageReport This Post
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