Hi, hi, hi. I am planning on using one of these two headshots for submitting for film, and would love some opinions on them. The first has been retouched, the second, not yet. Thanks!
The degree to which you are tilted in the first one bothers me a little. I think if you rotate it so that the eyes are even horizontally you'll seem a little more engaging.
Also, maybe think about cropping off a bit of the bottom of the shot (or a bit of photoshopping to close the gap). I am not a fan of looking down into an open shirt -- draws the attention away from your face.