Do you guys like it im using it for film/tv

It's easier if you break a headshot down into two separate categories, "Style" and "Quality."

Style-wise, the brick wall is too distracting. Quality-wise, the picture appears to be blurry.

Bad rotouching may be the cause.

I'm going to post a column on retouching in a few, look for it.

www.robertkim.com

heres another one

1st picture: look nervous but acting cool, shoulders hunched a bit, stiff. Eyes are connecting to me though, that's good. This headshot would work only if they are looking for this specific look at the right time.

2nd picture: The shirt blends way too much with the background, and your hair. Your eyes have this 'stalker' look.

Second one is terrible. It looks like a floating face and arm.